Original image by (Paul Baichoo)



Make of this design what you wish but not bad for a Saturday mess around!

you can see more at www.frankvangreunen.co.uk

I've got a porch.

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Niiiiicce, love the response!


Fantastic comment, cheers ;P


Well, i'm trying to find out which joins you are talking about so i know if i missed something or if which ever joins you are talking about are supposed to be there. xx


it was a mess around.

I'm listening.

I've got a llama.

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Are you talking to yourself, Frank ?

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b0nkeR5

Seems like you're all talking to "Frank". innit!

It's like a small extension of your house.

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I thought maybe your spelling saw a dab sa imne for a sec.

I'd say watch the spacing between the fonts and the edge of the image. Having the text all pressed up to the edges at the top makes it look like the image has been cropped to close.

I'd also maybe work on her face... maybe vectorise it so it works with the hair a little better

It's all a little strange..

Did you take the royal oak bit from the picture of your Porsche and resize it?.. That's the header but then you've finished everything with a metallic touch.

Divine deception..?

Women smoking..?

Porsche..?...Arrows..?

.. Sorry but nothing links... just a bit random.

I think you need to start with a meaning before creating anything else otherwise it's just going to confuse people.



Edz is under rated.

Wickid

Now that is consructive criticism. Cheers JB


I didnt set out to make any sence of the design. It all is just random and besides i'm only a newby at this stuff, still trying to find my feet. Yes the Royal Oak is copied from the Porsche image.

Divine Deception. I wanted to add some text just for fun and didnt know what to word so i looked around me and saw a business card with Divine written on it and just thumb sucked Deception. This is just a mess around.

Cheers for your time!


Thanx Jamie ;P

The design is cluttered

The text is tacky

What more explanation do you want? It's like you've just thrown more and more onto it with little thought as to what you're doing.